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PROGRAM FOR SUCCESS:
- DEVELOP YOUR OWN CRITIQUE & SUPPORT
GROUP
Negotiate with at least one and up to four other KNOWLEDGEABLE
NOVEL WRITERS to set up a novelist's
writer buddy or private work group -- a circle of
peers. This novel writer's buddy group or circle
of peers should help each other and listen to one
another during bouts of doubt, writer's
depression, snags, blocks, to help brainstorm or
research when needed, and also to cheer each
other's breakthroughs, epiphanies, and euphoria.
Think commiseration, help, and celebration.
- 1000 NEW WORDS A DAY
Write a minimum of 1000 new words of fiction a
day at least six days a week (6000 words a week
miniumum). It is preferable that you write twice
that or more, but the point is to develop the
habit of writing. NEVER STOP WRITING AT A
SCENE BREAK OR AT THE RESOLUTION OF A CRISIS.
ALWAYS STOP WRITING AT A HIGH TENSION POINT. This
prevents stalling out and writer's block. NEVER
RE-READ WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN. Just go
on. Fixing is done after you've reached the end
of the story. If you need to change what happened
before, just make a note in the manuscript as to
what change you feel is needed, then write on as
if that change has been carried out. (Note that
at 6000 words a week, it will take you about
thirteen [13] weeks to write an 80,000 word book.)
- KEEP TALLY & BACK UP YOUR WORK
Keep track your daily word count to a running tally, posting it daily. Always back-up your work to keep it safe. Google offers a free service where you can upload documents. BACK UP DAILY.
- HITTING A SNAG
Don't fret. Think of the END of your book: How
does it end? Think of the characters in your book.
What are they like and what would they be doing
or thinking? Think of your story world. What
could be happening? Should you introduce a new
character? Maybe something happens in your world
or to your character that adds a wrinkle to his
or her dilemma. If you can't figure out how to
unsnag yourself, skip that scene or several
scenes and go on drafting from where you know the
story again. If all else fails, you can:
- Plot Map
- Outline
- Build a scene by scene synopsis
- Brainstorm with other writers
- READING YOUR WORK
Once you have reached the end of your work-in-progress,
take a day off to celebrate. Then:
- If you have just finished your first
draft: Print it out and read it straight
through, making short notes in the margin or on a
separate note pad (include page and paragraph)
about any content problems you see. Do not blue
pencil grammar or punctuation at this time. Do
not "fix" the story at this time. Do
read it straight through. Do not go back and
reread. This draft read should take you a maximum
of one to two weeks.
- If you have just finished your second
draft: Read it on screen out loud to
yourself or to someone else. Fix the spelling,
grammar and punctuation issues that you see and
hear as you go. Process at least 5000 words a day,
preferably 15,000 words. An 80,000 word book
should take you six days to read through at
optimum work levels, but, for those who have
limited time, plan to allow four weeks for this
process.
- If you have just finished "finalling"
your manuscript: Do a proof read and
last edit. This can be accomplished using a
silent read and/or reading it aloud again. Allow
one to four weeks for this.
- EDITING / REWRITING YOUR DRAFT, SECOND
DRAFT, OR FINAL VERSION OF THE MANUSCRIPT
- NEVER WORK ON THE ORIGINAL FILE. ALWAYS
WORK ON A COPY OF THE LAST BEST FILE OR ON A NEW
INTERFACE. The draft is your reference,
not your working copy. The same is true for your
second draft.
- Again, you must work from start to finish
without going back. You ONLY go back
after you've reached The End and start another
third draft...which is the most it should take if
you have maintained story logic and cohesion. If
you are stuck on plot holes, before starting the
third and final round, make a scene-by-scene
outline, plot map, and/or detailed synopsis. Then
start round three and move through the manuscript
from front to back.
- There are several methods to use when second
drafting or finalling a novel. You can use the
printed copy and, setting it beside you,
completely retype the work into a brand new
interface, or you can add/edit a copy. How you do
it depends on what works best for you. SECOND
DRAFTING should take you anywhere from four to
thirteen weeks to accomplish. FINALLING a
manuscript should take you one to eight weeks.
- WHAT NEXT?
Work with a buddy or small circle of
like-minded writers to read each other's author
final manuscripts. Hopefully not everyone's
manuscript is author final at the same time...or
else everyone's manuscript IS ready at nearly the
same time. Either way works, but decide a
reasonable but effective schedule. Each person is
looking for plot holes, logical errors, grammar,
punctuation, and spelling errors in other members'
manuscripts. Each member should give a running
dialogue on what they liked and what stopped them
in their reading of your work...and you in theirs.
Plan on spending two weeks per member's book
multiplied by the number of members in your
circle. It should take you only two weeks to read
and comment on an "author final"
manuscript, four at the outside, including
nitting for grammar, punctuation, and spelling
errors your eye picks up. Your main job as a
member of a novelist's peer review circle or
novel buddy is to find places where the story
stops you reading or drops you out. Note that
spot and why it dropped you out, made you pause,
or caused you to suspend belief so you can tell
the author. Make note of stylistic and voice
problems that negatively affected your read.
PLEASE TELL THE AUTHOR WHAT WORKED -- WHAT
EXCITED, DELIGHTED, TERRIFIED OR INTRIGUED YOU.
EFFUSIVE PRAISE WHEN WARRANTED IS A NOVELIST'S
BEST REWARD...aside from selling the manuscript,
of course.
- AFTER THE PEER REVIEW
After your work has been read and
commented on by your novel buddy or peer circle,
think about what they said. Pay attention to
places they all independently pointed out as a
problem for them. Pay particular attention to
places most or all members agree as problematic.
If you agree with them, change the manuscript. If
you don't agree with them, don't.
- SUBMIT
WRITE YOUR QUERY, SYNOPSIS, OUTLINE, AND BLURB.
SELECT THE AAR AGENTS AND PUBLISHERS YOU WILL
SUBMIT TO, LISTING THEM FROM BEST TO LEAST BEST.
SUBMIT YOUR NOVEL STARTING AT THE TOP OF YOUR
LIST. It is usually wise to get your peer circle
or buddy's help with queries, blurbs, cover
letters, and synopses.
- KEEP SUBMISSION RECORDS
Keep a running tally of who you submitted to and
when, when they replied, whether they rejected
your manuscript, or if/when they requested a
partial and/or the whole manuscript. When you
secure an agent or publisher, certainly post your
success for all to celebrate. Have a party!
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